J-Nelson's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Portrait of young girl]

Cool

I think the folds in her clothes could use some more work.

[Grudd The Master of Monsters]

Amazing

Now, I don't know if the quadropus is supposed to be slimy, but if it is you could add some highlights to imply it is. Of course, if it isn't supposed to be, then disregard my comment.

jouste responds:

ooh i suppose a quadropus could be slimy! that would help him in combat for sure!

*highfives*

[Lily]

advice...

Lay off the large amounts of highlights and don't use the burn tool, it's messy. Try to make the light source more obvious.

JokerKitty responds:

I actually really liked how this one turned out....I wanted her to be very shiny, her outfit is supposed to be some glittery latex.....and i don't use the burn tool.

Dodge, yes, burn, no.

[fIHsVH]

Awesome

Very great. I can tell a lot of effort went into this.

[Grime Wine Part three]

Interesting cartoon

I'm liking the facial expressions.

JWBalsley responds:

Thanks a lot, he's a fun character!

Cheers!

[H.U.N.K.2]

Nice work

The text looks like you just slapped it on, though. Try to make it more interesting.

GabrieleB responds:

Tx i agree , totally

[Fishman]

Cool

A neat, creative design. Maybe you could add some scales to it or something.

Owenn responds:

Yeah, I'm still fleshing it out. I'll probably add to it in the future

[Grey loves Fry]

Great

I like your use of highlights. The creature could use some darker shades on it.

TreasurePlanet responds:

i agree!
thank you very much for your review

[Self Portrait I]

Good work

Nice, but you should add more shading to the hair and draw on better paper. Also, you can go a little farther with shading on the face. Get higher contrast.

[The Consumer]

Background and character should interact

You should add some green to that creature because the light passing through the green clouds should be green.

GoddaM responds:

aye! that IS what is missing : } I'll need to update it (was also thinking of adding some noxious sort of vapor rising from the "lake" waddaya think?